2018年1月27日托福写作真题回忆与解析

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    本次考试重复了2016.09.10综合考题。

  综合写作

  话题分类自然科学

  考题回忆总论点Reading material: There were evidences indicating that Brendan and his clews arrived North America.

  The lecture: These evidences provided by the reading material were unpersuasive or inadequate.

  阅读部分1. A story recording the journey of Brendan referred Faroe Island and Iceland, which were islands in the course of the journey to North America.

  2. The ship-making technology was already advanced enough to support Brendan’s journey.

  3. There were evidences found in some places of NA proving that Brendan lived there.

  听力部分1. Islands referred in story were not necessarily Faroe Island and Iceland.

  2. Curragh designed by then researchers are different from the ship of Brendan.

  3. The signs found in NA could be left by native people of NA.

  解题思路这篇综合写作,从逻辑上讲,分题目属于“事件真伪”类题型。阅读会提及某一事件,并提供相关证据证明这个事件是真实的,听力会反驳说这些阅读提及的证据都是不够充分的。

  参考范文请根据阅读和听力要点原创范文

  The reading material hold the argument that there were evidences indicating that Brendan and his clews arrived North America. However, in the lecture, the professor believes that these evidences provided by the reading material were unpersuasive or inadequate.

  Firstly, the reading passage cites a story recording the journey of Brendan, referring Faroe Island, and Iceland which were islands in the course of the journey to North America. In contrast, the professor refutes the theory of the reading material, and he regards that islands referred in story were not necessarily Faroe Island and Iceland. These islands could be other places.

  Secondly, the reading passage provides another evidence that the ship-making technology was already advanced enough to support Brendan’s journey. On the contrary, the professor in the lecture argues that Curragh designed by then researchers are different from the ship of Brendan. Though Curragh was able to finish a journey to NA, Brendan’s ship cannot achieve the long distance expenditure to NA.

  At last, the reading material describes evidences found in some places of NA proving that Brendan lived there. However, the professor also gives an opposite opinion. He insists that native people of NA could leave these signs. Some of these signs were similar to the alphabets of Irish, but most of these signs were images like suns and praying hands.

  独立写作

  话题分类教育

  考题回忆Which one of the reason is most important in helping students to study in colleges and universities?

  A、Having access to the university tutors who can provide individual instruction for the students who have difficulty in study.

  B、Having the help and encouragement from the family and friends.

  C、Having excellent teachers in high-school who can help the students before the university.

  解题思路每次把写考试范文当文学创作,就会憋上火。

  大学教育的意义是什么?怎样才能让大学时光不虚度?感觉一碗浓鸡汤又要出现在前方。

  “三选一”题型的问法通常就是:如下选项哪一个最好(或者是哪一个最不好)选项有A、B、C。假设我们的总观点是:”我认为A最好“,那么分论点可以论述:A好理由1;A好理由2,......当然,还可以补充说明:B和C为什么不够好。

  对于这一道题目,这一次我们选择C,即:好的高中老师能够最大程度的帮助学生在大学中接受教育。可以从如下三方面来行论述,

  1. 高中生的三观未定,容易受到外界影响,好的老师能够引领他们为将来做准备;

  2. 高中时期接受的教育是一个人未来学术与职业生涯的基础;

  3. 重视高中教育,能够 让高中生不浪费他们的大学时光,也能够受益更多年轻人。

  参考范文原创范文

  As the cradle of learning, schools play a central role in cultivating the new pillars of society. Thus, a sound and well-maintained educational system will boost the further development of a nation. Such a system encompasses different components, including preschool education, basic education, higher education and continuing education. In order to enable colleges and universities to benefit more students, I have a notion that excellent teachers in high school can help students before they attend colleges and universities.

  To begin with, high school students who are full of curiosities about the money-oriented world are supposed to be instructed by wise teachers. It is during this special period of life that one's values are easily affected and primarily formed. Thus, in order to adopt a correct attitude toward wealth, they should be required to comprehend the most fundamental theories about this world. Under the overpowering influences of the information age, young people severely lack the common sense and the ability to distinguish between right and wrong. Witnessing the varied conducts of adults, they would instinctively wonder about the truth hidden inside. Thereafter, they might receive some misleading and be negatively influence. Misunderstandings, misconceptions and misjudgments should be the greatest hazard to the innocent minds of teenagers. Obviously, all these concerns can be saved if more excellent teachers are hired to educate these teenagers in high schools.

  In addition, the education a person receives in high school is the foundation of his future academic and career life. Teenagers start a brand new stage of their life since the first day of their high school study. If the foundation of a skyscraper is unstable, how could it endure the overwhelming weight and height of its superstructure? A poorly-guided high school student will hardly get the opportunity to be enrolled by a promising university. It is during these critical years of learning that a high school student's potential begins to show and learning structure is established. It is wise decision on the part of high school teachers to help teenagers make early preparations for the further college and university life.

  Last but not least, everyone cannot ignore the truth that number of high school students is larger than that of college and university students. Laying emphasis on the education of high school students by hiring excellent high school teachers will bring substantial benefits to society in whole. According to the statistics from UNESCO, number of high school students in China amounts to quadruple of young people having the chance to receive advanced education. In other words, giving high school students superb education not only helps these future college and university students but also benefits the majority of young people.

  All in all, emphasizing the importance of high school teachers will help young people cherish their time in college and university and obtain more achievements.