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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is no doubt that I do strongly advocate this idea that the best way to travel in a group led by a tour guide. There are numerous reasons why I agree with this opinion, and I would in here explain a few of the most important ones.
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At first, I can get many conveniences if I travel in a group led by a tour guide. I don't worry about some things such as residence, transportation, and eating. During the whole journey, I can completely enjoy the pleasure of traveling without being disturbed by some trivial things. Another reason why I agree with this idea is that traveling with a group people is more enjoyable than traveling alone. We can share with the beautiful view each other and can express our feeling each other. In addition, if I encounter certain difficulties, there will be many people to help me. So, this traveling pattern will also more safe. The last reason is that a tour guide will let us learn more knowledge about where we will go because we aren't familiar with that place. Maybe due to our ignorance, we will miss many interesting places without a tour guide. Understanding the reasoning above, it is quite safe now to say: the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
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本段集中对作者的选择理由进行了讨论，共提出三个理由并简单做了解释：第一，跟团旅游很省心；第二，一群人比一个人旅游要更有趣；第三，导游的讲解会让我们学到很多。最后总结并再次肯定自己的观点。 |
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满分要素剖析：
一、 语言表达
本文的语言表达简单但清晰，也不乏长难句，能做到传理达意不拖沓。搭建文章架构的标志语词很明显，作为内容填充的描述性语句也排列整齐，因此整篇文章干干净净，读者与作者之间能快速建立起沟通桥梁。
Another reason why I agree with this idea is that traveling with a group (of) people is more enjoyable than traveling alone. 在这里another reason提示作者已经进入第二个理由的陈述，引出下文，十分清晰。The reason why+从句属于why引导的定语从句，后面用陈述语序，表达理由。同时，除去定语从句之外的句子是一个that 引导的表语从句，表语从句中又包含了动词现在分词词组做主语的例子，因此有很多用法可以借鉴。
There is no doubt that I do strongly advocate this idea that the best way to travel in a group led by a tour guide. 毫无疑问用there is no doubt句型。后面的从句中do的作用值得注意，在这里是做助词，后接advocate这个动词表示强调。
During the whole journey, I can completely enjoy the pleasure of traveling without being disturbed by some trivial things. 在文中作者用了不少程度副词来加深自己的立场，比如这一句中的completely，还有上句中的strongly，还有做助词的do，用法多样，可以学习。With/without的复合结构是一个多功能，有效率的结构，可以避免从句过多的繁琐，又能起到需要的延伸作用。
二、 逻辑结构
本文从正面对比论证了自己的观点，在每提出一个正面分论点的同时，也列举出另一种方式相对应的缺陷，从而全面地完成论述。
全文是总分总的结构，开头交代背景，提出立场，接着三个分论点集中在一个段落里面列举并做简单的讨论，段落结尾随即结束全文，踏实工整，清楚明白。
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